Pass one the glass card problem
The sky held up; the veils did not. Their masks faded too late, so every copy panel showed straight edges — exactly the floaty glass-card default this project bans. Mobile had two widows in the hero (“goes down.” dangling; “OF SLEEP” alone on line three), and the scroll cue was ivory on light lilac, nearly invisible. Fixed the masks, rebuilt the hero line breaks (text-wrap:balance on mobile, nowrap segments in the meta line), shadowed the cue. Upgrade: the lift panel — a floor indicator on the right rail that rides the sky’s own progress hook and doubles as navigation.